你有沒有覺得自己並不完全是人類？
這是一首關於我們體內游弋的水生生物的短詩和對話：

《遠洋回響：一次內在之旅》 

	凝視著淡藍色的天空
	融入涼爽的碧藍海洋
	和柔軟白色的雲朵一起
	漂浮在泡沫的波浪之上，

	我感受到生命永無止境的流動——
	即使浪潮仿佛永遠靜止。

	空氣中彌漫著海洋的氣息，
	喚醒了我最原始的記憶：
	我仿佛聽到遙遠時代的回聲，
	那時我們第一次從這片水的搖籃中浮現，
	鰓化為肺，鰭變為腳。腦海中的魚仍然游動，
	而我大腦中的魚仍在游動，
	也仍記得古老波浪的聲音。


禮彌：（搖搖頭）這家伙腦子裡有些奇怪的東西。我很想稱之為腥。

塔拉：　確實。我們每個人都帶著海洋的印記。

安德烈：當我們想到地球的年齡時，人類的大腦似乎非常現代。「人類」的部分其實很微小，在那之下，
　　　　深海的低語仍在回響。我們體內的遠古部分從未真正沉寂，它們只是被重新編織成了新的形式。

敏：　（嚼著一枝歐芹）我同意。我們內心漂浮著太多古老的殘片。所謂“我”的概念……簡直淺薄得可笑。

譯： Rosemary和Soft

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來自於黃月武先生的《文字的新領域：文學盛宴》
摘要：　　關於遠洋意識與人類海洋祖源的一些思考。
關鍵詞：　遠洋意識、海洋祖源、進化記憶、海洋詩意、原初意識

作者：T Newfields [黄月武 / 新田博] (1955年生）
开始：1996年 静岡市 （日本）・完成︰　2025年  静岡市（日本）
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Revise the following sentences to remake them more poetic and vivid: 

Pelagic Echoes: An Inward Journey (Revised)

Gazing as pale blue skies melt into cool, azure seas.
and soft, white cloudy wisps slide over foam-cupped waves
I perceive the ceaseless flow of existence, 
even as the surf appears eternally still.

The air, pungent with the ocean's breath, awakens a primal memory—
I hear an echo from a distant age when we first emerged from these watery cradles, 
and our gills turned into lungs as our fins turned into legs.

The fish within my brain swim on, 
remembering the ancient rhythms of the waves.

Orapan: (shaking her head) There's something wonderfully strange, and almost fishy swimming in this guy's mind.

Tara:   Indeed. We all carry the ocean's imprint. The "human" part of is small. Beneath it, the deep murmurs still.

Noel: When we think of our planet's age, it seems human brains are very modern.
The ancient parts within us are never truly silenced, only woven into new forms.

Gwen: (chewing on a sprig of parsley) I agree. Lots of ancient debris floats within us.
The notion of a single “I” feels… laughably shallow.

Summary: Some thoughts about pelagic consciousness and our marine ancestry.

Long-Summary: An exploration of the concept of pelagic consciousness and our aquatic ancestry, reflecting on the whispers of human evolution and primal awareness still resonating within us like an oceanic poem.

Keywords: pelagic consciousness, marine ancestry, evolutionary memory, oceanic poems, primal awareness


IN ORIGINAL MUTANT ANGLISH: 

Gazing at pale blue skies malt into cool, azure seas . . .
theugh the surf suemz unchangang . . .
und tha smelle auf eire revives deep mammuries . . .
uf a differant un distunt aige –
when we unmerged frym theese wadders . . .
und our gills tarned anto lungs . . .
then fins to legs.

The fish within me brain still swim
an remembar soundz ah ancient waves.

Orapan: (shaking her head) There's something fishy in this guy's brain.

Tara:   That's true of all of us: the ancient parts are never fully erased, just supplemented.

Noel:   Actually, human brains are very modern.

Gwen:   (chewing on a sprig of parsley) I think Tara is right: lots of ancient debris floats within us.


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